gianthogweed

Res Amatoria

Cranky Romance & Grumpy Erotica

Yakuza Pride - H.J. Brues After Ken and Ryu, I was hoping M. Bison will pop out to kick some ass, but alas, it did not happen.Several points of the story are so out of proportion as to border on ridiculous.Ken is so Mary Sue as to take your breath away. (The eyes of two different colors? WTF? By now, even kids trying to write their first fan-fiction aren't so disgustingly obvious).And all the other characters are so useless, although well-delineated, as to arouse sympathy.If the author had turned down the bullshit a notch or two, she'd have been able to produce a good novel.