gianthogweed

Res Amatoria

Cranky Romance & Grumpy Erotica

Out of Focus

Out Of Focus - L.A. Witt As threesome go, this one sucks big time, because in the end all that remains is the feeling of 'them and him', despite the author's feeble effort to convince us otherwise. And to be honest, my rating would have risen significantly, if Jordan, at the right time, had said 'Thanks, but no thanks'.Moreover, some sex scenes are hot, but others could have been sacrificed to delve into the relationship between the characters, and to give a more satisfying reason to their love.